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Anissa T
04-29-2008, 04:33 PM
Okay, I'm starting a new thread for a Stargate related multi-member story. I've left the work untitled for now. Perhaps several chapters in, we as a group can title the work.

Rules:

1. Go no higher than a PG-13 rating, when your writing.
2. No "extreme" violance, some is just a given with what the Stargate members encounter.
3. Do your best to use correct grammar and language structure. I realize we are not all experts, but reread, then read again before posting. If it is not understandable, you will be given a short time frame to fix it, if not then it will be corrected or deleted depending on the severity of the writing.
4. Keep in mind, the story must flow. So, even if you have something particular in mind, do not try to force it into the story or DRIVE the story in that direction. Try to fit your ideas into the direction of the story, not the story into your ideas.
5. To save members from having to read pages and pages of writing just to respond, please limit each posting to 3 paragraphs (do not make your paragraphs chapters long to get around this rule, this will force me to go in and determine what is an appropriate amount of writing for three paragraphs, the rest will deleted). You certainly do not have to write 3 paragraphs, just ensure you do not write more than 3 in each individual posting.

6. You cannot post again until atleast one person, other than yourself, has posted a new piece to the story.

7. This is a non-commentary format. If you have comments please PM or use the fanfic commentary section to address the writer(s) of a portion of the story. If you have concerns about the work, please PM the admin/moderators.

*Reserves the right to add or delete rules as need*

Good luck and lets make this a great story.

Anissa T
04-29-2008, 04:37 PM
An angelic sound could be heard. If only Col. Carter were here. She would certainly be intrigued by this.

Robin K
04-29-2008, 07:25 PM
Teal'c turned his head slightly, trying to determine where the sound was coming from. For the moment, he was totally unaware that his teammates were not where he had left them...well, not exactly where he had left them.

Mesmerized by the...music? Yes, it sounded like music, he...

colonel Mitchell
05-01-2008, 08:44 PM
...tried to find were the music was coming from. wandering the halls for an hour teal'c still...

Anissa T
05-21-2008, 04:31 PM
.....could not locate the origination point. It was everywhere, but no where. Curiosity had gotten him so that he looked up to realize that he was lost. This didn't concern him much, but thought he'd better figure out how to get back, but again this music.....sound....noise, was down right enchanting.

colonel Mitchell
05-24-2008, 12:36 AM
until he had enough and decided that it was in his head and tried to find his room agian

Anissa T
06-12-2008, 09:18 PM
Okay, now he knew the music was causing irrationality. Deep down inside, he had remembered being away on a mission, not roaming the halls looking for his room. "I must concentrate". Teal'C drifted away again, but only momentarily. His thought was of Master Bratac and a lesson in concentration which ended up with the butt of a staff weapon to his backside. For the first time in his life, he found that funny as opposed to humiliating. Now he understood why Master Bratac had smiled when it happened and not been angry. Teal'C began to walk again and briefly pondered the notion of being 75 again.