Child of the Tok'ra

[Torie2]

I got it now! Here's where you can tell me if you like the story. I didn't quite understand this part of the forum until now. I also accept constructive criticism too. Feel free to tell me if I should change something.

[cb49747]

Very good. I'm verry intrigued at the concept of tok'ra child. Keep writting.

also would that be a Barkley at the bottom of your post?

[Torie2]

Actually that is a Barkley. I'm also a Big Valley fan and Jarrod Barkley is my favorite. I'm a member on two Big Valley ezboards and a friend there made that for me since I didn't know how to do it and we don't have photoshop on my computer.
Back to the story... I'm glad you are enjoying it. I've had the idea since watching "Jolinar's Memory" and "The Devil You know" in May. I thought it would be a great concept for the 7 episodes dealing with Jolinar and Martouf. Also their daughter being raised by Jack O'Neill was another fun idea I had.

[cb49747]

My wife is a big big valley fan. She reads a lot of the fan fiction on those sites. Probable the same ones you go to.

Anyway, looking forward to more of the story.

[Torie2]

What's her name on there? Maybe I know who she is.

[cb49747]

Her name is stacib but she only reads she doesn't write.

She said she reconized who you were.

Chris

[cb49747]

Very good keep it up.